The bar chart compares the proportion of males and females who exercised on a regular basis in Australia in 2010 and they are divided into six different age groups.

Overall, it is evident that females were more likely to do physical activities than males did in almost all age groups except for 15 to 24. Middle aged females（中年的評判标準不統一，建議直接說年齡區間） were the most physically active, while males aged between 35 to 44 did the least activities.

Men aged between 15 to 24 had the highest exercise rate among all male age groups with 52.8% of female doing regular physical activities（語言啰嗦，with a percentage of 52.8%）. As they are getting older, the proportion of exercising people decreased, reaching the bottom at 39.5% in the 35 to 44age group. The the corresponding figures started to increase for the other three age groups. 46.7% of males who were over 65 were willing to do physical activity regularly.

Females show an opposite trend.(這裡的概括是不準确的，并不是所有年齡段的趨勢都是相反的) The Percentage of females exercise regularly rose as they were getting older.（這句話的問題也是不準确，女性在54歲前是上升的，但是54歲之後就下降了） The proportion outnumbered that of male in age group 25 to 34 with 48.9% women choosing to do regular activities. However, the rate dropped slightly to 47.1% when females were over 65, yet still higher than that of males.（女性的數據量有點太少了，而且缺乏與男性的橫向比較）

缺乏小作文的結尾段，來總結圖表趨勢

任務回應與完成：7分

語言連貫與銜接：6分

詞彙豐富程度：5.5分

語法多樣與準确：5.5分

綜合評分：6分

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