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考試真題

The international community must act immediately to ensure that all countries reduce the consumption of fossil fuels such as gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

題目分析

●本次考試的題目屬于環境類話題，該類話題考試的頻率也比較高，本次提供一篇之前考過的相似範文供參考。

●範文開頭段介紹背景改寫題目後提出個人傾向。

●主體段分為兩個段落，第一段從國家層面分析自然資源消耗過快的原因；第二段提出中國的案例，警示社會和政府不應該枉顧責任，以利益為驅動。

●結尾段總結全文強調主題。

範文示例

Introduction

Background sentence

Depletion of the world’s natural resources (世界自然資源的枯竭) has been the source of major alarm and discontentment (重大恐慌和不滿) over the past half century or so.

Rephrase the topic

Evidence presented by experts that the finite nature of natural resources (自然資源的有限性) will lead to major energy crisis(重大能源危機) within the next few decades is still not being taken seriously (認真對待) by powerful figures (權威人士) in government,or those connected to the oil and coal lobbies (石油和煤炭遊說).

Attitude or personal opinion

Despite such substantial and powerful opposition (如此強大的反對力量), collective action (集體行動) must be taken to address the severity of the crisis (解決嚴重的危機).

譯文

背景句

在過去半個世紀左右的時間裡，世界自然資源的枯竭一直是引起重大恐慌和不滿的根源。

改寫題目

專家提出的證據表明，自然資源的有限性将在未來幾十年内導緻重大能源危機，但政府或那些與石油和煤炭遊說有關的權威人士仍然沒有認真對待。

立場或個人觀點

盡管有如此強大的反對力量，仍然必須采取集體行動來解決嚴重的危機。

Body paragraph 1

Idea

The most obvious cause of this state of affairs is without doubt that this will financially and politically threaten the interests of (威脅…的利益) many people.

Reason (Why)

Such figures are able to use their wealth and standing (利用他們的财富和地位) to buy political influence (政治影響力) in major oil-consuming countries (主要石油消費國) to manipulate government policy (操縱政府的政策).

Explain (Example)

This makes a significant enough number of politicians (n. 政治家) who determine to transform to renewable energy (向可再生能源過渡) fraught with obstacles(困難重重), because they face relentless and intractable opposition (無情的反對) of the powerful fuel lobbies.

Conclusion

Therefore, development of environmental protection can barely be satisfying.

譯文

觀點

造成這種情況的最明顯的原因無疑是，這将在财政和政治上威脅到許多人的利益。

解釋觀點 (理由)

這些人能夠利用他們的财富和地位，在主要石油消費國購買政治影響力來操縱政府的政策。

進一步解釋或例子

這使得很多決心向可再生能源過渡的政治家困難重重，因為他們必然面臨強大的燃料遊說團體的無情的反對。

結論

因此，環境保護的發展很難令人滿意。

Body paragraph 2

Idea

However, we do need urgently to put aside (放在一邊) the interests and give sustainable development (可持續發展) of the global into priority.

Reason (Why)

The government of China has long expressed its resolution (決心) to promote green economy and cutting pollution (減少污染).

Explain (Example)

Recent years, it adopts a more interventionist approach (一種更加嚴重的幹涉方法), which introduces some of the most progressive and far-reaching environmental policies (一些最進步和影響深遠的環境政策) in the world.

Conclusion

Without the influence of money-backed oil lobbies (資金支持的石油遊說集團), the Chinese government is in a better position to (處于有利地位) introduce and strictly enact environmental legislation (嚴格執行環境立法), designed to transition (v. 轉變為) the country to a greener energy model (一個更環保的能源模式).

譯文

觀點

但是，我們現在迫切需要把利益放在一邊，把全球的可持續發展放在首位。

解釋觀點 (理由)

中國政府長期以來一直決心推動綠色經濟，減少污染。

進一步解釋或例子

近年來，它采取了一種更加嚴重的幹涉方法，引進了世界上一些最進步和影響深遠的環境政策。

結論

在沒有資金支持的石油遊說集團的影響下，中國政府在引入和嚴格執行環境立法方面處于有利地位，旨在将中國（的能源模式）轉變為一個更環保的能源模式。

Conclusion

Main idea of the essay

The solution to reducing our collective consumption of fuel (對燃料的消耗) is to look at the Chinese model.

Prediction

A strong state which is prepared to act in defiance of (不顧)the interests of the rich (富人利益) is in a far better position to reduce its dependency on (減少對…依賴) natural resources.

譯文

主要觀點總結

為減少公衆對燃料的消耗，可以參考中國的模式。

預測

一個不顧富人利益而準備采取行動的強大國家，在減少對自然資源的依賴方面處于有利的地位。

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詞彙積累

depletion of the world’s natural resources

世界自然資源的枯竭

major alarm and discontentment

重大恐慌和不滿

the finite nature of natural resources

自然資源的有限性

major energy crisis

重大能源危機

being taken seriously

認真對待

powerful figures

權威人士

the oil and coal lobbies

石油和煤炭遊說

such substantial and powerful opposition

如此強大的反對力量

collective action

集體行動

address the severity of the crisis

解決嚴重的危機

threaten the interests of

威脅…的利益

use their wealth and standing

利用他們的财富和地位

political influence

政治影響力

major oil-consuming countries

主要石油消費國

manipulate government policy

操縱政府的政策

politicians

n. 政治家

transform to renewable energy

向可再生能源過渡

fraught with obstacles

困難重重

relentless and intractable opposition

無情的反對

put aside

放在一邊

sustainable development

可持續發展

expressed its resolution

決心

cutting pollution

減少污染

a more interventionist approach

一種更加嚴重的幹涉方法

the most progressive and far-reaching environmental policies

一些最進步和影響深遠的環境政策

money-backed oil lobbies

資金支持的石油遊說集團

in a better position to

處于有利地位

strictly enact environmental legislation

嚴格執行環境立法

a greener energy model

一個更環保的能源模式

collective consumption of fuel

對燃料的消耗

act in defiance of

不顧

the interests of the rich

富人利益

reduce its dependency on

減少對…依賴

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