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雅思小作文如何拿高分?最核心的技巧有4點:
其中,詞彙運用是最最核心的,是其他三點實現的基礎,根據小作文評分标準,詞彙使用占據了雅思小作文25%的分數。
那麼在雅思小作文中,怎麼通過詞彙表達來提高分數呢?下面為大家一一解答。
小作文詞彙運用總原則
首先,雅思小作文詞彙運用要堅持以下6個原則:
» Use correct synonyms in your writing.
使用正确的同義詞
在寫作中正确運用同義詞,會給考官留下“詞彙量很豐富”的好印象。
» Use a range of vocabulary.
使用豐富多樣的詞彙
» Do not repeat words and phrases from the exam question unless there is no alternative.
不要重複考試題目中的單詞和短語,除非别無選擇
» Use less common vocabulary.
不要使用太普通、老套的詞彙
» Do not use the same word more than once/twice.
不要重複使用同一個詞或超過兩次
» Use precise and accurate words in a sentence.
在句子中使用簡潔準确的詞彙
小作文的結構如何展開?
一篇完整的小作文,其篇章結構應該包括以下幾部分:
Introduction
開頭介紹
這部分包括:
描述細節
描述的主要内容包括3點:
結論(可選擇寫或不寫)
這部分一般包括:
小作文每部分應該用哪些詞?
小作文各部分有其具體的結構和表達句式,因此使用的詞彙也各不相同,下面為大家總結了:
開頭段所用的詞彙彙總:
Starting 開頭
Presentation Type 圖表類型
Verb 動詞
Description 描述
高分句式:
Examples :
1.The provided diagram shows data on employment categories in energy producing sectors in Europe starting from 1925 and till 1985.
2.The given pie charts represent the proportion of male and female employee in 6 broad categories, divided into manual and non-manual occupations in Freedonia.
3.The supplied bar graph compares the number of male and female graduated in three developing countries while the table data presents the overall literacy rate in these countries.
寫作Tips:
1. 開頭段一定要做到“驚豔”,它決定着考官的第一印象和你的整體分數。
2.千萬不要逐字逐句地抄題目,這樣做會扣分,應該用自己的話來改述引言部分。
3.開頭介紹和總體趨勢最好寫在同一段落中,字數在75-80字左右。
4.在總體趨勢描述中,不要給出具體的數字、百分比等,應該描述圖表最醒目突出的特征。
大家可以對比下面2種描述:
✘ "A glance at the graphs reveals that 70% male were employed in 2001 while 40 thousand women in this year had jobs."
✔ "A glance at the graphs reveals that more men were employed than their female counterpart in 2001 and almost two-third females were jobless in the same year. "
第2種描述才是更加準确和地道的表達。
5. 如果是多種圖表呈現,并且描述了不同類型的數據,你可以:
總體趨勢描述詞彙彙總:
In generalIn commonGenerally speakingOverall/It is obviousAs is observedAs a general trendAs can be seenAs an overall trendAs is presentedIt can be clearly seen thatAt the first glanceit is clearAt the onsetit is clear thatA glance at the graphs reveals that... 高分句式:Example:
1.In general, the employment opportunity has increased till 1970 and has dropped down afterwards.
2.As is observed, the figures for imprisonment in the five mentioned countries show no overall pattern of increase or decrease rather shows the considerable fluctuation from country to country.
3.Generally speaking, USA had a far more standard life than all the other 4 mentioned countries.
4.As can be seen, the highest number of passengers used the London Underground station at 8:00 in the morning and at 6:00 in the evening.
5.As an overall trend, the number of crimes reported increased fairly rapidly until the mid-seventies, remained constant for five years and finally, dropped to 20 cases a week after 1982.
開頭段結束後,你需要另起一段來描述圖表的主要特征,這一段被稱為“主體段”。
根據圖表的數量和類型,描述段落最多不超過3段。
主體段的開頭短語:
As is presented in the diagram(s)/ graph(s)/ pie chart(s)/ table...As (is) shown in the illustration...As can be seen in the...As the diagrams suggest...According to the...Categorically speaking...Getting back to the details...Now, turning to the details....The table data clearly shows that...The diagram reveals that...The data suggest that...The graph gives figure...It is interesting to note that...It is apparently seen that...It is conspicuous that...It is explicitly observed that...It is obvious...It is clear from the data...It is worth noticing that...It is crystal clear/ lucid that...It can be clearly observed that...It could be plainly viewed that...It could be noticed that...We can see that...描述變化趨勢的詞彙彙總:
Increase增加
Decrease下降
Steadiness穩定不變
Gradual increase 逐漸上升
Gradual decrease 逐漸下降
高分句式
Examples:
1.The expenditure of the office remained constant for the last 6 months but the profit rose by almost 25%.
2.There was a 15% drop in the student enrollment of the University.
3.The population of the country remained almost the same as it was 2 years ago.
Tips:1. 'improve' / 'an improvement' 比較适用于描述經濟狀況,如果要描述具體數字,應該使用其他詞彙,如increase;
2.不要重複使用同一個單詞或短語來描述趨勢或變化,一個詞或短語的使用最多不超過兩次。
3.高分小作文需要使用多樣化的詞彙和句式結構來實現 。
總之,雅思小作文力求客觀描述信息,
用詞一定要精準,
并且善于變化;
行文邏輯上,
要學會抓重點,
不記流水賬;
如此才能寫出簡潔有力的好文章!
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