Internet

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition in three paragraphs. You are given the first sentence of each paragraph. Your part of the composition should be no less than 120 words, not including the words given. Remember to write clearly.

Internet

People now talk about a new word: “Internet”.——————————————————

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Internet is supposed to be an effective means of communication.—————————

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Internet has been part of many young people’s daily life.—————————————

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【範文】

Internet

People now talk about a new word: “Internet”. It is a kind of network which combines many subnetworks or computers together. Here, “inter-” means “go-between”; “-net” means “network”.

Internet is supposed to be an effective① means of communication. In a world full of various information as ours, Internet tells us some ideas about many happenings, local, national and even international. People can even see each other and talk to each other through Internet.

Internet has been part of many young people’s daily life. Youth are liable② to accept the new things or ideas. So they regard going into the “Internet” as a kind of life style. Through it, they do shopping, chat with each other and make friends or even send the letters which are called “E-mail”. Indeed, it is almost impossible to each other for them to get away from the Internet in their everyday life.

【注釋】

①effective：有效的

②liable：易患的；易于

【點評】

本文是一篇根據段首句提示展開的議論文。作文的論題是“Internet”（互聯網）。我們應從Internet是一項有效的交際工具“an effective means of communication”和成為年輕人生活中的一部分“part of young people’s daily life”這兩方面來闡述Internet這一論題。

本篇作文題材貼近生活。第一段先引人Internet的概念即一種連接子網或計算機的網絡：“a kind of network which…”，并用構詞法知識來解釋Internet的詞彙意義。第二段根據段首句的提示寫Internet的優點——有效的交際工具：了解時事、進行交流等等。第三段指出互聯網已成為年輕人日常生活的一部分，他們可以運用“Internet”做許多事情：購物、聊天、交友甚至發電子郵件“E-mail”等等。

本文采用總一分一分的結構，第二段和第三段都是支持段，支持說明第一段的論點，并且主要論述Internet的特點和應用。行文時，整篇文章收斂于一字标題“Internet”之下，主題鮮明、錯落有緻、互補性較強。

參考文獻：英語作文高分必背叢書：大學英語四級寫作/李華田主編，武漢大學出版社，2005

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